Eight Ways To Structure Your Story

Tuesday, April 11, 2017
Eight Ways To Structure Your Story at thebeginningwriter.com

Structure is nothing more than a way of looking at your story material so that it is organized in a way that is both logical and dramatic.
- Jack M. Bickham

I recently started a new writing project and I know that the idea is bigger and more complicated than anything I have every done before. I knew that I needed to get organized or it was going to be a complete mess.

Distinguished Author Nancy Lamb wrote about story structure in her book The Art and Craft of Storytelling. She reminds us that structure isn't a prefabricated box that you cram your story into. It is more like a flexible framework that helps you move through your narrative without losing your way. 

She tells us:

"Think of structure as a series of road signs posted along the journey of your story. Without it, narrative has no form and plot has no provocative way to move the reader from one moment to the next, from one scene to the next.

The most basic element of structure is what we are all taught in school: every story has a beginning, middle, and end. Every scene has a beginning, middle, and end. But how these elements are dramatized, how they are conceived and shaped, juxtaposed and presented, is up to you.

Storytelling rules aren't restrictions. In fact, a basic understanding of the rules frees you to you to do your job as a writer. Each author must approach the structuring of a story in a way that feels comfortable to him or her."

Eight Approaches To Structuring Your Story

There is no perfect way to fit the pieces of a story together. We have to plan and experiment, fall down, get back up, fall again, and get back up again, before we settle on a way that works for us. The most important thing is that we keep going until we get it right. 

With that in mind, Nancy Lamb has provided us with eight ways to approach structuring our stories. 

#1 Keep It Simple

The most fundamental way to look at story is as a narrative with a beginning, middle, and end. Formulate what each of these means to the plot and how they relate to each other. Then write your story.
  • In the beginning, define what your hero wants and why he wants it.
  • In the middle, create the obstacles the hero must overcome in order to accomplish his goal. 
  • In the end, resolve the situation in a believable and logical way.
Once you've settled on these fundamentals in your own mind, build a story around them, expanding each section and enlarging each plot point as you move through the narrative. 

#2 Play It As It Lays (Otherwise known as pantsing) 

Make a few notes on your characters and scenes. Get a firm concept in your head of what your book is about. Then take a deep breath and begin.

Here's your winging it, allowing one situation to lead to the next that leads to the next. There's not much advance planning but there is room for spontaneity. 

For most authors, even seasoned ones, this is a risky way to write a book. The open-ended approach makes it too easy to stray from a well plotted story path. That said, there's no question that this method works for some people. Playing as it lays is analogous to walking down a dark and unfamiliar read using only a tiny flashlight. You can't see very far in front of you but if you focus carefully on the business at hand, it's possible to make it all the way to the end of the road. 

In this approach, begin by putting your hero in the opening situation and presenting the opening complication. Then let your characters do the talking and your imagination do the walking. 

#3 Take Baby Steps

Break your story into manageable segments that remove the intimidation from the task. Establish the primary story elements of beginning, middle, and end. Once you've done this, envision your narrative as an ongoing, interconnected chain of scene and sequel. One action causes a reaction that causes another reaction and reaction. Step by step, scene by sequel, you construct one progression after another, shaping a story, from simple to complex, with these basic building blocks of plot. 

For instance, after you open your scene, ask yourself the following questions:

What is the logical sequel to this scene?

What action does this scene trigger that leads to the next scene?

How have I planted the hook to pull the reader into the next scene?

What has my hero done to move the story along?

What does this scene contribute to the larger context of the book?

#4 Create a Literary Outline

Although your outline is an integral part of the structure, you needn't consider it a fixed entity. Don't be afraid to make changes or explore a new possibility when characters lead you down a different path. 

Before you write the book, break down each chapter into a basic outline form, noting which characters and situations are involved in each chapter. You don't need to be too detailed. The purpose of the outline is to provide a map for you to follow and give you an overview of the book. Furthermore, it's not necessary to plot out every twist and turn in the road; some of the most interesting journeys involve sudden detours and unexpected encounters. Even as you follow the map, make every effort to stay open to surprise. 

#5 Walk the North Forty

Develop a detailed chapter-by-chapter diagram of your book, creating a visual map for you to follow. Once you grasp this overview, you'll have a stronger picture of what is happening in your story. When you see those places where you have dropped a plot stitch or where one character hasn't appeared in a while, you can pick up the thread before you move on. 

I began writing my first novel without a plan. But it soon became evident that I needed a structural guide for my loosely conceived story. With the help of a friend, I constructed a running chat of my book, laid out and organized on shelf paper. A lengthy visual aid, to say the least. But it worked.

First I divided the paper into chapter sections with a vertical line. Then I did the same with the characters, plot, and subplots in horizontal lines that intersected the chapters. I then marked down the appearances of the various characters in different colored inks throughout the grid. One character was blue. One was red. Another was green. I did the same thing to the plot lines, making notes here and there as reminders that I shouldn't forget to include these things in the book. 

When I finally rolled out the plot diagram, all twelve feet of it, across my living room floor and took a look at it, my entire novel was laid out before me in living color. 

In order to make sense of what was happening in the book, I strolled the length of my outline like a rancher checking the fence on the north forty. I looked for plot and character omissions. I examined my overlaps and excesses, most of which were immediately apparent after inspecting the chart. If there were no red and green or blue notations for two chapters, I could see that I had to remind the reader about this character or pick of the thread of that subplot. If the plot was dominated by one color, I re-examined the balance I had created between characters. 

This strategy can apply to fiction and nonfiction, short books and long ones. In fact, I've used variations on this approach for several of my books. 

#6 Decorate Your Wall

Make scene-by-scene notes on 3x5 cards and arrange them on a wall or bulletin board. The advantage of this method is that you can change your cards around, add and toss others, without messing up your overall story. 

If a bulletin board is too confining, choose a door or a blank wall. Then use Post-it notes to define characters and create scenes. Not only do these notes come in different colors, they also come in different sizes. Take advantage of the variety. Color-coding characters and plot helps you clarify your story. Once you have the visual of the whole, you can see what character or theme or plot point is missing. 

#7 Use Classical Structure

Follow classical story structure of Greek drama from the inciting incident to the climax, to the resolution. Whether your're writing a story of a quest or puzzling through the challenges of an experimental novel, this method offers a time-tested way to formulate your story. 

#8 Mix and Match

Do your own thing. Consider all the different ways to structure your narrative, and then choose the methods your prefer. If you want to mix scene and sequel with a literary map, do it. There are no rules here. Your goal should be to find the combination that is the most effective for you, as well as your story. 

None of these approaches are carved in stone. You've got lots of options and room to move. As I said before, the best way to structure your story is what works for you. This is the time to experiment. If one approach isn't a good fit, try another. As you try these out, ask yourself:

Which method gives me the most confidence in writing my story. 

Which method do I feel most comfortable using? 

Which plan allows me to move from beginning to end with the most ease?

Which approach offers me the greatest chance in finishing my book?

Until next week! 



(Even More) Quotes to Inspire and Guide You

Wednesday, April 5, 2017

Like most writers, I am a voracious reader, and I am always writing down my favorite quotes. So, as you can imagine, I've collected quite a few over the years. I've shared some of my favorites here on the blog before. You can find them here, and here, if you care to look.

For this week, I've pulled together another collection of quotes that I love. Some provide helpful tips and advice but I also love the ones that let us know that, as writers, we're not alone. That other writers go through the same things we do. That they experience the same insecurities and fears we do.  

So, here we go!

"The greatest part of a writer's time is spent in reading, in order to write; a man will turn over half a library to make one book."
- Samuel Johnson

"Write. Rewrite. When not writing or rewriting, read. I know no shortcuts."
- Larry L. King

"Always dream and shoot higher than you know you can do. Don't bother just to be better than your contemporaries and predecessors. Try to be better than yourself."
- William Faulkner

"People say, 'What advice do you have for people who want to be writers?' I say, they don't really need advice, they know they want to be writers, and they're going to do it. Those people who know that they really want to do this and are cut out for it, they know it."
- R.L. Stine

"Just write every day of your life. Read intensely. Then see what happens. Most of my friends who are put on that diet have very pleasant careers."
- Ray Bradbury

"When your story is ready for rewrite, cut it to the bone. Get rid of every ounce of excess fat. This is going to hurt; revising a story down to the bare essentials is always a little like murdering children, but it must be done."
- Stephen King

"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works."
- Virginia Woolf

"Know your literary tradition, savor it, steal from it, but when you sit down to write, forget about worshiping greatness and fetishizing masterpieces."
- Allegra Goodman

"One thing that helps is to give myself permission to write badly. I tell myself that I'm going to do my five or ten pages no matter what, and then I can always tear them up and the following morning if I want. I'l have lost nothing. Writing and tearing up five pages would leave me no further behind than if I took the day off."
- Lawrence Block

"Literature is strewn with the wreckage of men who have minded beyond reason the opinions of others."
- Virginia Woolf

"It is perfectly okay to write garbage. As long as you edit brilliantly."
- C.J. Cherryh

"You must stay drunk on writing so reality cannot destroy you."
- Ray Bradbury

"You don't have to be great to get started, but you have to get started to be great."
- Les Brown

"It is better to write a bad first draft than to write no draft at all."
- Will Shetterly

"The best rule for writing, as well as for speaking, is to use always use the simplest words that will accurately convey your thoughts."
- David Lambuth

"There are simple maxims... which I think might be commended to writers of expository prose. First: never use a long word when a short word will do. Second: if you want to make a statement with a great many qualifications, put some of the qualifications in separate sentences. Third: do not let the beginning of your sentence lead the readers to an expectation which is contradicted by the end."
- Bertrand Russell

"The hardest thing about writing is, in a sense, is not writing. I mean, the sentence is not intended to show you off, you know. It is not supposed to be 'Look at me!' 'Look, no hands!' It's supposed to be a pipeline between the reader and you. One condition of the sentence is to write so well that no one notices that you're writing."
- James Baldwin

"If you find a lot of explaining is necessary, something is wrong your material or your approach to it."
- James Gould Cozzens

"You can't tell or show everything in the compass of a book. If you try to show or tell everything, your reader will die of boredom before the end of the first page. You must, therefore, ask yourself what is the core of the matter you wish to communicate to your reader? Having decided on the core of the matter, all that you tell him must relate to it and illustrate it more and more vividly."
- Morris L. West

"Begin with something interesting rather than something boring; begin with action rather than beginning with background information; speak about the characters after they have appeared rather than having them appear after having having spoken about them."
- Alexandre Dumas Pere

"The best thing is to write anything, anything at all that comes into your head, until gradually there is a calm and creative day."
- Stephen Spender

"I think the best thing any writer can do is keep a journal. During writer's block, your journal is invaluable. Write to yourself about being blocked. Explain to yourself the feelings of frustration you are feeling, or the anger you are having with your talent for letting you down. Describe to yourself the chapter or scene you are writing you are writing: who the characters are and where you are trying to get to in the chapter or scene. Write about it. Believe me, it will start to come, right there in your journal."
- Dominick Dunne

Well, that's it for this week! Do you have a favorite quote? Let me know and I'll add it to the post. 

Have a great day everyone and I'll see you next week! 

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