Kelly Leiter 7:30 PM
Right now, The Beginning Writer is going through a complete site overhaul. I'm moving to Wordpress and I have also been working hard at coming up with a whole new design and aesthetic for the site. I can't wait for you to see it! Unfortunately, it is still going to be a while before the new site goes live. If you'd like to stay updated, please consider following the blog through the social media sites in the sidebar. I am most active on Twitter but I will be updating all of them with any major news.
Until then, all the posted articles here will still be accessible but there won't be any new posts until the new site goes live.
Once it does, there will be all new weekly posts and the old posts will be updated. There will be a brand new newsletter you can sign up for to have tons of helpful information delivered right to your inbox. I'll also be accepting guest posts along with holding several contests where you can win awesome prizes, like copies of my favorite books on writing.
Until then, have a wonderful day and I'll talk to you again soon!
Kelly Leiter 2:43 PM
My Twitter account, @kellyleiter was hacked and I no longer have control over the account. I am trying to get Twitter to shut down the hacked account but I want you to know that if you receive any messages from @kellyleiter that it is not from me.
My new account is @beginningwriter. Please follow me there.
My new account is @beginningwriter. Please follow me there.
Kelly Leiter 3:42 PM
What do I consider a productive writer? I guess that would be someone who writes regularly. Someone who gets the words on paper and meets the goals and deadlines she’s decided on. Someone who doesn’t procrastinate and doesn’t let her fear and self-doubt overwhelm her. Also, someone who uses her time wisely instead of wasting it on meaningless things.
In her book, The Productive Writer, author Sage Cohen calls productivity a lifestyle choice. She says:
Just as a vegetarian reinforces daily this way of life with the food he chooses to eat, the Productive Writer holds a clear and meaningful value that gets expressed and explored in a myriad of ways every single day--in the writing she does, the relationships she has, the spirit in which she works, and the opportunities she creates to move toward her goals.
As nuanced and unique as our writing lives are, such is our relationship with productivity. Different types of writing have different demands, and every project and commitment will teach us something new about who we are, what we’re made up, and what approaches bear repeating. This is the joy and the challenge of the writing life.
Start Where You Are
So how do we go about becoming more productive writers? Ms. Cohen gives us a few ideas:
Just get it down.
In the first-draft writing stage, just being in motion and getting the words down on the page is the most important part. Write as if you are laying down bricks, one after the other. None is more worthy than the next; each has it’s part to play as your writing takes shape. The composite will eventually add up to something whole.
Practice makes perfect possible.
Every time you sit down to write, no matter what you are writing, or how high the stakes, think of what you’re doing as practice. Why? Because it takes the pressure off and keeps humility front and center. The more we practice, the more possible our writing will become. And the more confident we will be in our ability to show up at the page and make something interesting happen there.
Be willing to Not Know.
Most writers don’t know exactly where they are heading with a piece of writing. Even if they have a detailed outline or a very specific idea in mind of what their destination might be, and even if they arrive at said destination, the specific trajectory is likely to reveal itself along the way. Trust that what you want to be known will make itself evident along the way. Your job is to be in motion, be willing to be surprised, and follow where you are led. There will be plenty of time for steering, that is, editing, along the way.
That’s it for today! I’ll talk about being a more productive writer on Wednesday. Hopefully I’ll see you then!
(image by Gene Wilburn)
Kelly Leiter 5:08 PM
There are three main types of point of view (POV): first person, second person, and third. I’ve talked about understanding POV before, but since choosing the right POV for your story is so important, I wanted to share more of what I’ve learned about the advantages and disadvantages of each.
One writer and editor of Writer’s Digest, James V. Smith Jr. covers this well in the book Crafting Novels and Short Stories: The Complete Guide to Writing Great Fiction.
As we already know, first person POV refers to the I, we, me, my, mine, us narrator, often the voice of the main character.
There I was, minding my own beeswax when she up and kissed me. I nearly passed out.
Advantages of this POV:
- It feels natural to most writers because we live in an “I” world.
- You can create a distinctive internal voice.
- You can add an element of craft by creating a narrator who is not entirely reliable. (See Unreliable Narrator).
- You are limited to writing about what the narrator can see and sense.
- The narrator must constantly be on stage or observing the stage.
- You can’t go into the minds of other characters.
This is the “You” narrator. This POV is rarely successful, and even then it works best in shorter books. (See Jay McInerney’s Bright Lights, Big City)
You’re just standing there. She comes along and kisses you. You nearly faint.
Advantages of this POV:
- It gives you the power to be different, even eccentric in the way you speak to the reader so directly.
- It begins to feel quirky, whether you’re reading or writing it.
- It can say to a publishing professional, “I’m a Jay McInerney knock off! Reject me!”
The he, she, it, they, them narrator, third person is the most common POV in fiction. It offers a variety of possibilities for limiting omniscience information that the narrator and reader are privy to in the telling of the story.
Third Person Unlimited Omniscience:
In this POV, the author enters the mind of any character to transport readers to any setting or action.
He stood stiff as a fence post, watching her come his way. What did she want? he wondered.
She had decided to kiss him, no matter what. So she did. She could see the effects of her kiss at once. He nearly fell over.
Advantages of this POV:
- It can enrich your novel with contrasting viewpoints.
- Both you and your reader can take a breath of fresh air as you shift from one character’s POV to another’s.
- You can broaden the scope of your story as you move between settings and from conflicting points of view.
- You can confuse yourself and the reader unless every voice is distinctive.
- You can diffuse the flow of your story by switching the POV too often. (Notice how the last passage about the kiss jolts you from one POV to another.)
- It’s easy to get lazy and begin narrating as the author instead of as one of your characters.
The author enters the mind of just a few characters, usually one per chapter or scene.
He stood as stiff as a fence post, watching her come his way.
What did she want? he wondered, as she approached. Then he saw the determination in her face. Good crackers! She was going to kiss him, no matter what.
She did, too, and he nearly fell over.
Advantages of this POV:
- It has all the advantages of third person unlimited POV.
- You can concentrate the story by keeping to major characters’ (and strategic minor characters’) thoughts.
- There aren’t any, really; by imposing POV discipline, you minimize the downsides of unlimited omniscience.
These are by far the most common points of view and will suit most any story.
Which point of view did you chose for your story?
(image by Jason Jenkins *text added myself*)
Kelly Leiter 4:35 PM
I never used to write every day. I was more of a binge writer, writing only when I felt inspired, and then for long hours at a time. But I would always get burned out and have to take a long break. This lead to day after day being wasted because I was too tired or I didn’t feel inspired anymore. Sometimes weeks would go by and I wouldn’t work on my writing at all and that definitely won’t get me anywhere.
In her book, Living Write: The Secret to Inviting Your Craft Into Your Daily Life, writer Kelly L. Stone reminds us that daily actions create long-term outcomes. She says:
You may not realize it but whether or not you write today is important--it matters. There is power in the act of daily writing, and when you touch your craft every day, it becomes part of your life, a habit that you’ll miss if you skip it too often. Successful writers have learned to weave the craft of writing into their daily lives, and you can too.
It’s what you do now, here, today, that will determine if you finish your novel. The more you write, the more you feel like writing. Momentum will build, and with it, your motivation, dedication, and enthusiasm for writing.
How Can I Write Today?
Of course it’s not going to be easy to write every day. But simply not feeling like writing will be the downfall of most aspiring writers like us. In order to be successful authors we have to sit down and write even when we don’t feel like it.
Ms. Stone also tells us that instead of dwelling on the reasons we can’t write, we should ask ourselves, “How can I write today?” This can help change our feelings from ones of dread to ones of anticipation.
Asking yourself, “How can I write today?” sets up the expectation that you will write. If something else comes up, figure out how you can write either before or after. Even if you only write one paragraph, you still wrote.
You could set a timer for ten minutes and write during that time. Then the next day set the timer for twenty minutes. Increase your time by ten minutes everyday and by the end of the week you’ll be writing for seventy minutes.
What do you think? Can you take ten minutes out of each day to write? I know I can.
(image by thedreamygiraffe)
Kelly Leiter 11:26 AM
Hello everyone! I am so happy to be back! You see, I finally got the opportunity to go back to college last year so of course I jumped on it. The plan is to go to the local community college for my Associate of Arts degree and then transfer to University for my Bachelor in Creative Writing degree. I haven’t been to school in many years so it was a bit overwhelming at first so I took a break from the blog and concentrated only on my schoolwork. I am so happy to report that I have gotten all As and only two Bs. In fact, I got 100% on every English paper I turned in over two semesters.
Now that I have gotten used to the level of work involved in getting good grades, I feel like I can finally start blogging again and not have to worry about taking time away from schoolwork. Although my schooling will always come first, I feel confident now that I can get back to my regular posting schedule.
For my first post back, I wanted to share something valuable I just learned.
I’ve talked before about the “show, don’t tell” rule. But if you’re a reader like I am, you can see that not every author follows that rule. So how do we know when to show and when to tell?
In her book, “This Is Not A Writing Manual: Notes for the Young Writer in the Real World,” writer Kerri Majors tells us about how much she hated hearing from her instructors and peers that she needed to show more, and tell less. She tells us:
The fact that I was hearing this “show, don’t tell” comment on my writing drove me nuts not just because I’d been hearing it forever, but because 1) plenty of writers told as much if not more than they showed (hello, people…Philip Roth?), so why couldn’t I? and 2) I thought I showed plenty. I’d been working to change this so-called problem for years. Why didn’t my peers get what I was trying to do?
Her teacher responded, kindly but firmly, “You can tell the hell out of any story you want, as long as it’s working. What you’re hearing is that your telling isn’t working. Not as well as your scenes. You write good dialogue. When your characters interact with each other on the page we can see them and hear them. We want more of that.”
Finally it stuck. For Kerri, and for me. We can tell, as long as it works. It isn’t that we should never tell. It’s just that more often than not, we are better off showing. Especially if our telling isn’t very good.
No one has put it this way before so when I read this, it stuck with me. Hopefully it will stick with you too.
(image by Orin Zebest)
Kelly Leiter 1:16 PM
I’ve recently made it to the middle of a story I’m writing and it didn’t take long for me to realize that I didn’t know how to handle keeping the story going. So I looked to one of my favorite authors on writing for guidance.
Heather Sellers wrote two of my favorite books on writing, “Page After Page” and “Chapter After Chapter.” But what I am going to refer to today is from a chapter she wrote in Writer’s Digest, “Crafting Novels and Short Stories,” where she says, “To get across the middle you must involve some element of discovery--something you have to figure out as you write.” Otherwise, your writing will feel canned, preplanned, flat. Like stale popcorn. This is where braiding comes in.”
Introducing Layers In Your Story Through Braiding
Ms. Sellers explains braiding like this:
“Braided books (or articles or stories) are made up of three or four strands. (Like in hairstyling). Instead of slogging though one story line and then flattening somewhere in the middle, braids help you mix it up. You work in small, manageable sections, folding in new material. Things stay fresh and lively.”
She goes on to say:
“You need more than one thing going on at a time. You don’t need to know how everything will work out. When you braid, happy accidents will occur.”
This is really good for me to hear because I don’t really know how my story is going to end. I have an idea, and I have outlined some of the major scenes I need to tell the story I want to tell, but I don’t know exactly how they are going to lead to the ending I have in mind. I’m trying to work that out in my writing journal.
The Best Way To Write A Book
Ms. Sellers says:
“The book teaches me what it is about as I write it. That’s the best way to write a books: to follow a structure that allows you to discover wise insights, images, and a natural organization as you go along.”
“If you are concerned about organization, try dividing your book into three substories, or three subthemes. You can write each one straight through. Or you can divide and conquer, working on each strand a little at a time.”
“Good writing has layers. It does more than one thing. It leaves room for the reader to go, Aha!
What do you think about braiding? Let me know in the comments.
I hope everyone has a wonderful day!